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Obscura TITS
Obscura Aug 29 '18
I CAN EASILY WRITE YOU OUT OF EXISTENCE, BONEBUTT.  WATCH ME MAKE YOU A PERMANENT RESIDENT OF THE FIERY LAKE WHERE EVEN YOUR SCYTHE WILL MELT AND THE WORD "NO" IS YOUR CHASTITY BELT.
AK
AK Aug 29 '18
You'd need a much larger font for that, sugar bubbles.
AK
AK Aug 29 '18
In the future, schnookums, please accompany music videos alluding to your mostly-more-or-less-unwavering devotion to me with some sort of text, question, comment, or the oft-preferred derrogatory remark. XOXO.
The Forum post is edited by AK Aug 29 '18
Obscura TITS
Obscura Aug 29 '18
Sure thing Satan.
PrinceLucifer
PrinceLucifer Oct 25 '18
I created a facebook group for my novel. I want somebody to help me release it. I am not able to release it myself worldwide because I am living in a fucked up country that is not English speaking. And personally I think this novel was the lamest novel I ever wrote. I was writing other novels before but I never finished them because I was too lazy. After long time writing I finished this novel. But it is lame and because I am not an English speaking man and English is not my native language there are many grammatical mistakes in the book.
AK
AK Oct 25 '18
No one's going to help you release your stupid novel.
Dark Enlightenment
Dark Enlightenment Oct 25 '18


Quote from PrinceLucifer I created a facebook group for my novel. I want somebody to help me release it. I am not able to release it myself worldwide because I am living in a fucked up country that is not English speaking. And personally I think this novel was the lamest novel I ever wrote. I was writing other novels before but I never finished them because I was too lazy. After long time writing I finished this novel. But it is lame and because I am not an English speaking man and English is not my native language there are many grammatical mistakes in the book. 


аз не говоря вашия родния език. Аз дори не знам какъв е звуковите звуци на тези писма. Успях да напиша последователен отговор. 


If I put the above into a translator it comes out as: 


I do not speak your native language. I do not even know what the sounds of these letters are. I managed to write a consistent answer.


Originally consistant was coherent.


Other than that transliteration was a success.


For example, what would happen if I translated this very sentence through many other languages before translating that to english?


(English -> Albanian -> French -> Korean -> Danish -> English)


E-faked.


Published by English and English translation of English translation of translations for translators?


So my suggestion is you try using Google Translate.


And AK is right no one here is going to help you with your stupid novel.




The Forum post is edited by Dark Enlightenment Oct 25 '18
Chiron
Chiron Oct 26 '18
Ouch.
Chiron
Chiron Oct 26 '18
Your not going to g to get anywhere without an agent.
PrinceLucifer
PrinceLucifer Nov 15 '18
I deleted the novel and gave up releasing it. I think it was really lame.
Dark Enlightenment
Dark Enlightenment Nov 16 '18

Maybe it was your unconcsious showing you mercy? 


I come up with many ideas at 3 AM because I have bi-polar insomnia.  1/10 goes somewhere. Like a junkie on heroin making plans for the future. I will start tomorrow...

What about instead of a young girl falling in love with Satan, a young girl is possessed by satan, only satan is a woman?  Then, because she is essentially Satan, she rises to the upper echelons of influence and power. You could use the Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde cliche instead of the Beauty and the Beast cliche. 

Have her being all insane in private and charismatic in public. I'd would read the first 14 pages of that.


To give actual advice: pay attention to ability for story arc and character developement.  Where do you go with a forbidden love story that isn't in the one line synopses? You remove the B, C, and all subsequent storylines with such a narrow premise. One that demands all action feed the main storyline.  Only so many ways to do Romeo and Juliet.  

The Forum post is edited by Dark Enlightenment Nov 16 '18
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